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savvysuzy
savvysuzy
Des is a Paradox
Apr 2 2008, 5:08 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 2 2008, 5:08 PM EDT
Sometimes we see him
sometimes we don't
sometimes he smiles
sometimes he frowns
sometimes he's talking
sometimes he's quiet
sometimes he's quite daft
but mostly he's rather deep
and not half bad to look at...
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Mossbreath1995
1. RE: Des is a Paradox
Oct 28 2008, 7:17 AM EDT | Post edited: Oct 28 2008, 7:17 AM EDT
That's not a Haiku... Haiku consists on 5 syllables in the first line, 7 syllables in the 2nd line, and 5 syllables in the 3rd line:

The Cherry Blossoms
Drift around Jack and Kate, The
The Perfect love scene
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