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Season Four Opens...
Jun 25 2007, 12:13 AM EDT Setting: The beach where the electronics cable leads out into the Looking Glass station. The sky above is darkening but there is just enough light to see clearly. The color of the sky is tangerine with sepia leeching in on it. Laying face first in the sand, just where the water breaks the shore is a lone body in near close focus. The waves gently lap over the bodies legs and then retreat back. Gradually we move closer to see that it is Desmond. As we focus in on his facial features we zoom in on his eyes which open in a stat. We see him gasp and use his left hand to pound the wet sand above his head as he spits out salty water and shakes his head side to side. "Aww Charlie" Desmond moans "I'm sorry brother." "You should be mate. You weigh more then you look. You nearly killed me gettin' you up here." Says a voice from a short pace away. "I thought..." Remarks Des as he props himself up on his elbows. "So did I but in those final seconds before that grenade blew, all I could think about was Clair and the baby. How could I just give up. Bloody hell man I gave up usin' for her. I took lumps from Locke because of her...What's a grenade?" He says this with a slight sarcastic laugh. Desmond turns over to see Charlie. He hears him but sounds, especially here, can often be deceiving. "Penny?" The word comes out as a question. "Just before the big kaplooey, she was on that monitor..." Charlie goes in a daze "Charlie!" "Penny, right. Right. Just that was all I had the chance to hear before that one eyed Russian pulled the pin. I told you we shoul've killed him before." "Damn It Charlie, what else did she say?" "Just what I put on my hand." "Then why does Naomi have my picture?" Que: music and title 14 out of 17 found this valuable. Do you? |
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RE: Season Four Opens...
Aug 27 2007, 2:35 AM EDT my story is this clarie an aron (aron is 3 ) at charlie funarul cause they just found the body clarie is crying aron asks "who is this?" clarie replys this is your father they we see a flash forward 10 year later of clarie and aron drive sharfts song is lay clarie says he'll always be my blood rock god (then we see what life would have been like had charlie lived ( he would have made a new band aron would havebecame a rock god and claire would have been a millionare the we see charlie wake up in his bed the the lost music 1 out of 2 found this valuable. Do you? |
